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(Fic) One Day In The Life Of Buffy Summers (Ch.10 of 10)

4th December 2008 (19:37)
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Buffy's having a really strange day.

Here's the tenth and final chapter, in which I stick closely to tradition. You'll soon see what I mean. Characters, in order of appearance: Buffy and Willow. Rating 18. (They're still in bed together, after all.) 1,096 words. Chapter One is here, especially for the benefit of anyone who doesn't read WIPs and wants to read through from the beginning now it's all complete. :-)
 


Chapter 10 - in which Buffy goes through some changes

As if from a great distance, she felt Willow shift under the sudden weight that lay atop her. Buffy felt she ought to move away, get off, but right now she lacked the strength. But then Willow's arms were around her, pulling her closer still, and she fluttered open her eyes to see her friend grinning at her. Grinning mischievously. And before Buffy knew what was going on, Willow whispered something in her ear.

Buffy's sex-befuddled brain had only just begun to process the words when she felt herself twisting and WARPING and shrinking and CHANGING and stretching and compressing and turning inside out and turning outside in, and it was indescribable like birth and death and pain and pleasure all combined and all at once, and just when she could take no more... it ended.

And she realised what it was that Willow just said. Five simple words. "Let the spell be ended."

In growing anticipation and hope she looked down towards her chest, and saw what she'd longed to see all day. Her breasts. Her wonderful boobs, just as perky as she remembered them. (And also pressed tightly against Willow's own, but that wasn't important right now.) And her crotch! It had nothing projecting from it any more. It felt exactly how it ought to feel. (Well, it wasn't usually jammed up against Willow's like this. But that wasn't important either.) Buffy squealed in delight and relief and enfolded Willow in a massive hug, babbling her thanks all the time. Her friend returned the hug enthusiastically, her body pressed tightly against Buffy's own.

It wasn't until after she came up for air again that it dawned on Buffy that she was, in fact, lying on top of the naked body of her best friend. While also being naked. With the full mutual nakedosity. It didn't feel wrong, exactly, after what they'd just done, but it did feel a little awkward. Uncertain quite what to do, Buffy settled on lifting herself up on one elbow and quirking a sardonic eyebrow in Willow's direction.

"So how come you didn't wait to change me back until after I got off you?"

Willow grinned cheekily, completely unrepentant.

"I was sure you'd want to change back as soon as you possibly could. I wasn't wrong, was I?"

Buffy gave an snort of amusement. "I can't really criticise, can I, after what you did for me? Even if you are taking blatant advantage now."

"No I'm not!" Willow's wide-eyed look of innocence was rather spoiled by the way she was stroking her hands up and down Buffy's back. And... ohmygod! She just wriggled! This was getting out of hand. Part of Buffy wanted to leap off and get away... but part of her didn't. Part of her wanted to wriggle right back.

"Mm-hmm. I'm getting off you soon, you know. Just as soon as my arms stop feeling like jelly."

"Sure. I wouldn't want to stop you." And with that ohmygodagain she just ran her fingers down Buffy's spine and it felt so good, and Buffy told herself firmly that it was just a few lingering traces of maleness from the spell, and it would wear off soon. Any minute now.

Then Willow cocked her head to one side and quirked a smile. "So what was it like being a man? Has it made you a better person 'cause you've seen how the other half live their lives? Are you all insightful and wisdomy now?"

Buffy considered that seriously for a moment... then shrugged her shoulders. Willow pouted.

"You're no use. You'll never be the star of your own TV show if you can't come up with some trite moral lesson from that week's adventure in the final scene."

"They'd never broadcast this scene anyway. We are kind of naked at the moment, or had you forgotten?"

Willow grinned. She clearly hadn't forgotten. "I dunno. HBO might show it..." Then she looked more serious, and brought up her hand to touch Buffy's face. Her fingers gently traced along her cheek, which was now smooth and feminine and totally non-stubbly. "It's nice to have you back, Buff. And I'm sorry for putting you though all this. Are you okay, really?"

"I'm fine. Happy to be me again. But what about you? Are you okay? It wasn't too awful for you, was it, with boy Buffy?"

"I'm completely non-traumatised. I could do without the, uh, ooziness factor, but at least it got you back to your normal shape. Which, no offence to men, I have to say I prefer."

"The whatiness factor? Oh! Um, sorry about that."

Willow shrugged. "You were a guy. Comes with the territory. Uh, so to speak."

"I guess... oh! Speaking of, did you.. I mean I couldn't tell, but did you, uh..."

"Did I come?" Willow gave Buffy a Look. "You don't know? You really were changed into a man, weren't you?"

Buffy felt stricken and guilty. "I was distracted! It was confusing and strange and I wasn't sure what I was really doing, and I..."

"Relax! It doesn't matter. We were doing a spell, to change you back. That's all."

"It does matter! It's not fair if you didn't when I did. We'll just have to keep going until you, er, do."

"No we don't. Nobody's keeping score here, Buffy."

But Buffy's conscience was doing exactly that. At least, she firmly told herself that the only reason she wanted to see and feel and hear and taste Willow have an orgasm of her own was because it would be fair exchange. And okay, maybe it was the aftereffects of the spell, too. Stupid spell.

She looked Willow in the eye. "So you're happy to have sex with boy Buffy but not with girl Buffy. Really?"

Willow looked confused, stammered out a few attempts at a reply, then finally managed, "You do remember you're straight, right?"

Now it was Buffy's own turn to give her friend a Look. "Didn't I say almost the same thing to you earlier? Remember what you said back?"

Willow blinked... then slowly began to grin. "You really sure about this, Buffy? You won't regret it later?"

"Absolutely not. I, uh, might not want to talk about it ever again, ever. This has been a really strange day. I'm thinking total denial, and forgetting it ever happened sounds really good. But this part? What we're gonna do? I'll never regret that."

And then they shared a kiss. And all that followed.
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"Uh, Will? I've never done this before. Talk me through it?"


Comments

Posted by: The Anti-OTP (snowpuppies)
Posted at: 4th December 2008 20:40 (UTC)

Yay!

Buffy's delight at getting her boobs back was brilliant, as was her non-projecting crotch. :P

I'm so glad Buffy wasn't no-touchy afterwards...and yummy girly sex ensues. :P

Really, though, I love the deep friendship that shows through this, especially in their comfortableness with each other, or maybe their comfortableness with being uncomfortable with each other in order to 'help' each other.

Great job, all over. Funny and strange and even a little silly at times, but still filled with meaning and emotion.

*applauds*

Posted by: StephenT (stormwreath)
Posted at: 5th December 2008 00:39 (UTC)

Glad you liked it! Writing Willow/Buffy friendship fics is one of my favourite things, even without the sex (be it girly or multigender). :-)

Posted by: none of the above (frogfarm)
Posted at: 4th December 2008 21:20 (UTC)
willow wesley fetal pigs

Ha, I was right. All is forgiven ;)

Seriously, not to sound all "I didn't come" but even this was still taunting me that there should be more...you wouldn't be working on any longer and/or more plotty stuff, would you? *looks innocent*

(Oh, and you have to let me know what you thought of "Impossibly Delightful Flesh". I thought Tara/Willow was handled the weakest but still reasonably well, Spike/Buffy were a hoot and a half, and Xander/Anya was absolutely screechworthy and made its points without crossing the line into gratuitous oversimplification.)

Posted by: StephenT (stormwreath)
Posted at: 5th December 2008 00:47 (UTC)

I didn't come

That's verging on TMI... ;-) And in terms of wordcount, this is actually, I believe, the second-longest thing I've ever written. Not currently working on anything but I've got a few ideas.

As for 'Impossibly Delightful Flesh'... read it, enjoyed it, didn't take detailed notes. :-) Nothing struck me as particularly out of character and a lot of it was very well-observed and funny. I did notice a lot of things that people tell me are now clichés, like Spike calling Cander "the whelp" and Tara "Glinda", but if this is an old and famous fic it's quite possibly where those phrases originated in the first place.

Thanks!

Posted by: Beer Good (beer_good_foamy)
Posted at: 4th December 2008 22:42 (UTC)

"You're no use. You'll never be the star of your own TV show if you can't come up with some trite moral lesson from that week's adventure in the final scene."

"You don't know? You really were changed into a man, weren't you?"

"Uh, Will? I've never done this before. Talk me through it?"

Hee!

Really nice ending to a really nice fic that really managed to balance the silly and the serious. I hope my comment on the last chapter didn't seem too critical - I do think there are some factors in this that could have been made a bigger deal of, but then again, the beauty of BtVS is that they don't have to. So kudos; you definitely managed to take a crazy concept and make it both funny, hot and thoughtworthy with some great character moments.

Posted by: StephenT (stormwreath)
Posted at: 5th December 2008 00:49 (UTC)

Thanks! \o/

I have to admit the idea of Willow telling Buffy she'll never be the star of her own TV show amuses me to a highly inappropriate extent. :-)

Posted by: curiouswombat (curiouswombat)
Posted at: 4th December 2008 23:31 (UTC)
Crazy Dru by Bear_icons

Hmm - I can see one big upside to the not-being there of boobs - I would be able to see my plate better, and maybe not spill my food as often...

Seriously, good stuff!

Posted by: StephenT (stormwreath)
Posted at: 5th December 2008 00:50 (UTC)

I'm not really sure Buffy has the same problem, though...

Thanks!

Posted by: none of the above (frogfarm)
Posted at: 5th December 2008 00:58 (UTC)

But you wouldn't have anything to catch the food when it fell.

Posted by: curiouswombat (curiouswombat)
Posted at: 5th December 2008 18:23 (UTC)
Hmm

Hmm - there is that...

Posted by: I write tragedies, not sins (mabus101)
Posted at: 6th December 2008 08:11 (UTC)

Highly amusing, Stephen...a great homage to a bizarre genre. ;-)

Posted by: StephenT (stormwreath)
Posted at: 6th December 2008 11:48 (UTC)

Thank you. :-)

Posted by: Elena (moscow_watcher)
Posted at: 6th December 2008 16:15 (UTC)

I totally love your story! I giggled and sighed and cheered. Of course, being a Spuffy girl, I enjoyed the scenes of Buffy/Spike interaction the most. But I also loved Buffy/Willow scenes a lot.

Do you plan to put One Day in your memories or tag it?

Posted by: StephenT (stormwreath)
Posted at: 6th December 2008 21:03 (UTC)

Thank you! (Like I said to elisi, anyone who wants to remix my fic to include a Spike/Buffy m/m chapter is welcome to, even if it's not something I'd necessarily enjoy writing myself. :-) )

Do you plan to put One Day in your memories or tag it?
It's in memories now. It's also on my Fanfiction Index Page.

Posted by: Elena (moscow_watcher)
Posted at: 6th December 2008 21:08 (UTC)

Spike/Buffy m/m chapter

LMAO!!! I love me my fandom! :)))

It's in memories now.
Thanks! I want to pimp it on TWoP and FanForum, but I'm too lazy to collect 10 links! :)

Posted by: riccadonna (riccadonna)
Posted at: 20th December 2008 18:16 (UTC)

I was not going to say anything, but what would be more rude, not comment at all or say something that's not a compliment? Please don't be offended. I liked this fic, the way you expressed the various changes of mood specially, and the sex was hot and interesting, with the gender change happening that way; my problem with this is that Willow and Buffy are friends, and actually best friends. To me, it equals being sisters, I feel toward my best friend exactly like I feel toward my sister--the only difference is in those childhood memories that we don't share. So, I didn't find it outrageous...but it squicked me some.

Posted by: StephenT (stormwreath)
Posted at: 20th December 2008 22:07 (UTC)

Thanks for your honesty, and I'm glad you liked most of the story at least. :-)

I do actually agree with you that Willow and Buffy's friendship is almost entirely platonic, although clearly I disagree with you on whether the "almost" part of that phrase is squicky or hot. :-) While I've written Buffy/Willow scenes before, I could never really imagine them in a relationship together: only one-off experimentation or Sex-Pollen-/-Aliens-Made-Us-Do-It scenarios (like this one is). Though I remain convinced that Willow had a crush on Buffy in the early seasons...

Posted by: treadingthedark (treadingthedark)
Posted at: 17th May 2009 15:49 (UTC)

That was fun, and funny! Soooo...did anyone ever write that Spike/Buffy MM addition? Because that would be awesome. ;)

Posted by: StephenT (stormwreath)
Posted at: 17th May 2009 16:19 (UTC)

Thanks!

Unfortunately not as such, although flake_sake has just started writing a fic where a temporarily genderchanged Buffy hooks up with Spike.

Posted by: treadingthedark (treadingthedark)
Posted at: 17th May 2009 17:31 (UTC)

Thanks, I'm reading that, it's great!

Posted by: Lily (lavastar)
Posted at: 16th October 2009 01:14 (UTC)

Randomly started reading this - and, omigod, adorable and hilarious and silly and sexy, yup, all of the above! I love everyone's funny reactions to boy Buffy, and Buffy's reactions to boy Buffy, and Willow and Buffy's sillyawkward sexytime.

Posted by: StephenT (stormwreath)
Posted at: 16th October 2009 17:15 (UTC)
buffy-willow

:-)
Thanks!

And what does it say about me that pretty much the only explicit HET sex scene I've ever written is Buffy/Willow?

Posted by: Lily (lavastar)
Posted at: 17th October 2009 19:02 (UTC)

And what does it say about me that pretty much the only explicit HET sex scene I've ever written is Buffy/Willow?

...that you've clearly out-lesbianed me, and deserve some sort of honorary lesbian title? I'll bring it up at the next Evil Lesbian Council meeting, after the weekly discussion of how world domination's going. :P

Posted by: ((Anonymous))
Posted at: 2nd February 2011 12:25 (UTC)

"I guess... oh! Speaking of, did you.. I mean I couldn't tell, but did you, uh..."

As a man, I found this much too realistic. lmao. Good job.

Posted by: StephenT (stormwreath)
Posted at: 2nd February 2011 13:36 (UTC)

:)

Thanks!

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